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10 Tips on Writing Effective Dialogue December 2, 2008

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1. Become an Eavesdropper

Listen carefully to the way people REALLY talk. They tend to talk in sentence fragments. They interrupt others. They repeat themselves. Try to get your dialogue to reflect authentic speech, but be careful not to become dull (real speech is OFTEN dull!)

2. Train Yourself to Notice

Observe the ways that people give away their social, economic and ethnic backgrounds by the way they talk. Use this knowledge when you create dialogue.

3. Don’t Overdo the Dialect

Readers very quickly become tired of trying to ‘interpret’ speech that is represented phonetically, or with apostrophes everywhere to reflect dropped letters. The trick is to choose one or two words/phrases that will give a taste of what the person is like to others. A little bit goes a long way.

4. Try Recording People’s Conversations

(Be careful with this!You may not be popular if you do it without permission and others find out – or if you use it unwisely. Be smart and get permission.) Listen carefully when you play it back. Often you’ll hear inflections and habits that you miss when you’re absorbed in a conversation first-hand.

5. Write First, Edit Later

Don’t be tempted to edit too much as you write – it’s better to let it flow, then give yourself some distance from the work and go back and edit later.

6. Read the Dialogue Out Loud

This is an excellent test for dialogue. Better still, get someone else to read your words. It’s even easier that way to hear sentences that don’t ring true, or that sound too stilted. Edit the work right away, while the problems are fresh in your mind.

7. Learn to Punctuate Dialogue Effectively

Good punctuation can make a huge difference to the effect of what you write. When you read the work out loud, decide whether the pauses are long or short (does the speaker just ‘run on’; does the dialogue require a comma, or should it be a semi-colon or a colon?) Don’t forget that when people trail off uncertainly, you represent this with an ellipsis (row of dots); when they are interrupted, you show it with a dash.

8. Make Sure Every Character Doesn’t Sound the Same

Some people speak in clear, well-formed sentences with perfect grammar; others make constant grammatical errors and stumble over words. Some people are bright and lively and their words and tone reflect this; others are slow and thoughtful. Dialogue should reflect all of these things. Most of all, make sure that each character is not just a reflection of YOU!

9. Use Quotation Marks for Speech, not for Thoughts

Your reader can become confused if you use quotation marks for both speech and thoughts. Thoughts are expressed in other ways – usually with a tag like ‘he thought’ or by using italics if they are expressed in the third person. (But that’s a whole other tipsheet…)

10. Don’t “Sandwich” Direct Speech Between Actions

When you write dialogue, make sure that the viewpoint character’s thoughts, actions and reactions are woven into the dialogue. Don’t have half a page of direct speech with the occasional ’she said’ and ‘he said’ to indicate who is speaking, then have a paragraph to describe the viewpoint character’s thoughts or actions, then another half page of direct speech. Dialogue should be a smooth blend of speech, actions, thoughts and emotions.

(c) copyright Marg McAlister

Marg McAlister has published magazine articles, short stories, books for children, ezines, promotional material, sales letters and web content. She has written 5 distance education courses on writing, and her online help for writers is popular all over the world. Sign up for her regular writers’ tipsheet at http://www.writing4success.com/


Writing the PDA Way December 1, 2008

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When we think of writing it triggers many thoughts and visions depending on our framing. It could trigger a lone man with a full astray, unshaven, staring at an old plunking typewriter with white blank crisp paper waiting in anticipation for his words.


If a mother or younger, it could conjure up an image of a 30-something woman typing away on a keyboard with an apron on, in between making formulas or getting ready for work, still dark outside. Pounding on the keys because the flow is there, just as the light from the window begins to change, trying to get as much onto the page before the kids need her attention.


If you grew up in a Catholic school in the 50s, writing could mean perfect penmanship and a rap on the knuckles if you didn’t.


The times have changed, thank goodness, and now children grow up with memories of learning to cluster and freewrite. To allow whatever needs to flow appear onto the page. There are more books than ever on creativity, and how to play and embrace the craft new everyday. It is a freeing time for writers.


Yet, three principles prevail no matter what your association to the meaning of writer appears. They are PDA, for short. No, not the PDA you carry around in your pocket. But the PDA a writer needs to carry around in the heart.


P=patience D=discipline A=action


The patience to allow our writing to mature with practice. To push just enough to keep us uncomfortable yet still allow us to keep trying.


The discipline to sit still long enough to get it started and completed. The discipline to keep picking up the pen, putting another sheet of paper in the printer, or buying new keyboards because the last one certain keys just plain gave out.


Action to keep the vision and dream alive for one more time, one more word, one more story, one more meaning.


Remember, the next time you want to write more or write better. Don’t pull out your PDA from your pocket, but pull out the ones that really count from your heart. The ones that truly affect your ass(ets), patience, discipline, and creative action.

EzineArticles Expert Author Catherine Franz

Catherine Franz is a Marketing & Writing Coach, niches, product development, Internet marketing, nonfiction writing and training. Additional Articles: http://www.abundancecenter.com blog: http://abundance.blogs.com


13 Publicity Tips for Professional Speakers November 30, 2008

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In a funk because other speakers seem to be snagging all the media attention? It’s time to start claiming your share. Here are a baker’s dozen of tips that will boost your publicity efforts and help you finally get noticed.

1. Every time you speak before a group, offer to submit a short
summary of your presentation for the group’s newsletter. Don’t forget to send your photo. It gets you in front of those you just spoke to as well as those who missed you the first time around. Many groups also send their newsletters to the media. Be sure the last paragraph tells people what you do and how to get in touch with you.

2. Call the advertising department of every newspaper and magazine you want to get into and ask for a copy of their editorial calendar. It’s a free listing of all the special topics and special sections coming up during the calendar year. It will tip you off to sections where your story idea would be a good fit, so you can query the editor weeks and even months ahead.

3. Call a reporter from your local newspaper and invite her to lunch or coffee. Offer yourself as a resource and Ask “How can I help you?” Feed her tips and story ideas. Become such a valuable source that she keeps coming back to you for more information and eventually writes about you.

4. Consider starting your own television show on your cable TV station’s community access channel. The station will provide the camera equipment for a $20 fee, and you can produce either one show or an entire series of programs. Air time is free. Call your cable company for details.

5. Build a network of other speakers who concentrate on your topic or area of expertise. Agree informally that you will refer reporters to each other whenever the media calls. Often, reporters want more than one source for a story. It’s a chance for all of you to get additional publicity.

6. Whenever someone asks you to write for their ezine or online magazine, visit their web site first and see if they have a resource section where you would be a good fit. Ask to be listed for free, in exchanged for providing an article.

7. If you publish a print newsletter, be generous with free subscriptions for the national and local media. You’ll be amazed how many reporters start calling you for interviews. If you can’t afford to pay people who submit articles for your newsletter, be sure to tell them they will be seen by national media who get your free subscription.

8. Don’t forget newspaper and magazine columnists. They’re always hungry for fresh ideas. Keep in touch with them and feed them ideas regularly.

9. Call local radio talk show hosts and invite them to call on you when other guests cancel. They will be thankful you offered.

10. Write articles for print newsletters. My favorite resource is the Oxbridge Directory of Newsletters, which lists more than 18,000 newsletters by topic and includes detailed information on the type of audience and subjects covered. Most larger libraries have this resource directory.

11. Write articles for electronic magazines and include a paragraph of information at the end that leads readers to your website. My favorite resource for thousands of ezines is Ezine Universe at http://www.ezine-universe.com

12. Contact your trade association and ask them to refer reporters to you. Many reporters who don’t know where to find sources start by calling trade associations.

13. If you have some level of expertise, always refer to yourself as an “expert” in your marketing materials, at your website, in information that explains your workshops, in your introductions, and in your media kit. The media always seek out experts and interview them.

Follow these publicity tips and soon be able to promote yourself, your products and your programs.

EzineArticles Expert Author Joan Stewart

Joan Stewart publishes the free ezine “The Publicity Hound’s Tips of the Week,” packed with valuable tips on how to generate thousands of dollars in free publicity. Subscribe at http://www.PublicityHound.com and receive free the handy checklist “89 Reasons to Send a News Release.”


THE ELEPHANT ROARED AND BROUGHT FORTH A TURD…Against Democ

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(An Eschatological Perspective)

By Doug Krieger

The original vulgarity was bylined: …The Constipation of America’s Mid-East Peace Policy!

It is with some trepidation that I embark upon this discourse; for one, out of respect for elephants, but more so because within the American framework of democracy I have so greatly benefited. Thus, to liken the extension of America’s efforts to democratize the civil administrations of Moslem stateseven with the caveat “considering cultural sensitivities”to the intestinal hardships of our beloved pacaderm is in itself cause for internal consternation, reflection, and a longing for interior relief.

“STUNT OMNES UNUM”

The current administration’s mascot bears some responsibility for the chosen political metaphor; however, it must be duly noted, that this article could just as well be entitled: Asinus asinorum in saecula saeculorum! (Latin for: “The Jackass of Jackasses in the Centuries of Centuries”, or “The Greatest Jackass in Eternity”this, and other Latin expressions in honor of Pax Americana will be duly sprinkled throughout this missive)giving equal honors to both dominate American political parties for their extended efforts at peace in the Middle East, for: Stunt omnes unum . . . they are all one!

Indeed, by giving credit to where credit is due, we must keep in mind that the commonality of purpose to secure America’s interests in the Middle East and, ipso facto, the West’s energy spicket, via propping up its Islamic dictatorships, or hastening the democratization of the region, is the continuous policy of both Democratic and Republican State Departmentsmake no mistake about it.

The Democrats differ only in the design of a better mouse trap and have no right to cast their stones of dispersion from their glass palace at the failed policies of the GOPpolicies now garbed in democratic hyperbole.

WELCOME TO THE THEOLOGICAL CALDRON

Peace in the Middle East! Better yet: What is the current administration’s Mid-East Peace Policy? Road Map to Peace? Peace Process? It is prudent, though policy makers would dearly extract this fixation from the debate, the theological implicationsMoslem, Jewish, and Christianfrom this conundrum of conundrums, and why, specifically, “Jerusalem (has become) a cup of trembling (i.e., “reeling” or “drunkenness”) to all the surrounding peoples . . . a very heavy stone for all peoples . . . though all nations of the earth are gathered against it” (Zechariah 12:2-3)?

The Biblical metaphor of “reeling” and “drunkenness” is actually the physical reaction of a person who trembles after imbibing a poisonous potion. You drink of this venom; you immediately go into radical convulsions, with one destination in view: death!

Initially, so it appeared our President’s so-called lack of a coherent Mid-East peace plan at the commencement of his administration both mystified and concernedsooner or later he too would be compelled to deal with this Middle East “tar” baby. Could you blame himgrasping this “cup of trembling” portends incessant disappointment and, worse yet, staggering political liability with prurient involvement leading toas we now bemoanintractable conflict.

Yet, the greatest “Consuming Nation” ever to countenance the planetfueled by the mercurial petroleum moleculewould inevitably be sucked into this black hole whose exit strategies escape all nations.

EXTOLING OUR VIRTUESPLAIN VANILLA

Nothing like pontificatingi.e., extolling our efforts at peace in the region. This was masterfully accomplished by the Council on Foreign Relations’ Aaron D. Miller at the CFR’s “Transition 2005: Israel, Palestine, and the Middle East Peace Process” forum in February. Dr. Millera former U.S. State Department official, having served six previous Secretaries of State by helping to formulate U.S. policy on the Middle East and the Arab-Israeli “peace process”confirmed my original thesis regarding the bi-partisan nature of our endeavors at formulating peace in the Middle East; to wit:

“The three Americans that have made the most compelling contribution in the history of American diplomacy, and there are only threetwo Republican secretaries of state, Henry Kissinger, James Baker, and one Democratic president, so it transcends party lines, Jimmy Carterall combined those qualities, with an acute sense of knowing when to intercede. That is how to do effective American diplomacy. And if in fact we were to succeed again, that is an approach that we have to come back to. (Note: Apparently, Miller dismisses President Clinton’s endeavors.)

In any event, bi-partisan consensus was summed up by political think tank Seeds of Peace president Miller as follows:

(1)President Bush must make the Middle East Peace Process a 24/7 top priorityworking with a diverse team of “competent” advisors.

(2)Policy must not neglect what’s happening on the “ground” (i.e., realities on the ground integrate with immediate policy).

(3)The U.S. must remain in control of its own policy (i.e., don’t let either side, Israeli or Palestinian/Arab, dictate).

(4)Beware of interim deals, but also beware of high-risk efforts to solve this problem quickly.

(5)Combine empathy and trust, with toughness, to both Israelis and Arabs.

Furthermore, avoidance of the black hole is uselessMiller concludes:

“If we want to supplement our war against terror, further the cause of democratization, there is no other issue that would do more to enhance our credibility than the pursuit of this one” (i.e., full engagement in the so-called “Middle East Peace Process” involving Arabs and Israelis).

Safe, reasonable, intelligent, thoughtfulyep, just plain vanilla. But the status quo of Dr. Miller’s world was about to be shaken with the departure of one Collin Powell, and the subsequent installation of National Security Advisor, now Secretary of State, Condoleezza Rice.

“LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!”

“In this time of great decision, I have come to Cairo not to talk about the past, but to look to the future a future that Egyptians can lead and define.

“Ladies and Gentlemen: In our world today, a growing number of men and women are securing their liberty . . .

“After all, America was founded by individuals who knew that all human beings — and the governments they create — are inherently imperfect. And the United States was born half free and half slave. And it was only in my lifetime that my government guaranteed the right to vote for all of its people.

“Nevertheless, the principles enshrined in our Constitution enable citizens of conviction to move America closer every day to the ideal of democracy. Here in the Middle East, that same long hopeful process of democratic change is now beginning to unfold. Millions of people are demanding freedom for themselves and democracy for their countries” (Excerpts from Sec. of State Rice’s speech at the American University in Cairo, Egypt on June 20, 2005).

Naturally, Dr. Rice’s (later references) to democratic aspirations for the regionaddressing her audience as “ladies and gentlemen” to highlight Islamic suppression of women in generalblew the Kaffiyeh off her Arab audience.

Notwithstanding all the cultural sensitivities to the contrary . . . it is nigh impossible and absurdly ridiculous to fathom how Judeo-Christian Americana ideals and cultural backgrounds relate to Middle Eastern realities on the ground (as we speak). Never mindthe President must opine:

“America will not impose our style of government on the unwilling. Our goal instead is to help others find their own voice, to attain their own freedom, make their own way” (Rice, in her same speech, quoting from President Bush’s second inaugural address, while prefacing his words with: “We are supporting the democratic aspirations of all people.”).

Thus, in one-fell swoop, we witness cultural wiggle room at its height as Arab states commence their march toward freedom and Islamic-style democracy!

EGYPT MUST LEAD, AS SHE LED OF OLD

“The people of Egypt should be at the forefront of this great journey, just as you have led this region through the great journeys of the past” (Again, excerpt from the Rice speech.).

At this point, one must ponder: What Egyptian journey of the past do we contemplate? How about the slave-driven, pyramid-building, totalitarian civilizations of the Pharaohs?

Of course we Americans intuitively know what the President and Dr. Rice mean (at least we once did) . . . but driving this democratic square peg into the black, moon-shaped hole of Islamic civilization may ultimately necessitate Alexander the Great’s resolution of untying the Gordian Knot he encountered at the ancient city of Gordium (100 miles west of Ankara, Turkey).

An oracle of Zeus alleged that if anyone could untie this knot, that person would be the conqueror of all Asia. Of course everyone knows, Alexander (champion of the Ancient West) cheated on the oracle by cutting the knot with his sword instead of untying itnotwithstanding, the avaricious behavior of the god Zeus still gave Alexander Asia!

Even so, the conclusion of the matter (i.e., incorporating nigh 1,500 years of Islamic civilization into Western thinking and democratic idealism first proclaimed by the Greeks) may ultimately necessitate a rather crude Greco-Roman application; simply put: CUT TO THE CHASE!

And, why might this be the case? Consider the utter futility of the West approaching the “Islamic Knot” of Asialet’s just consider the “lead” of Egypt toward democratic liberalization:

Nina Shea’s piece on Egyptian democratic ideals tells it bluntlythe Muslim Brotherhood would be swept to power if open elections were held in Egypt:

“Mubarak’s policies have created a situation in which pro-Western democrats like Ramy Lakah are silenced or driven abroad, leaving the Muslim Brotherhood as the only organized opposition within Egypt. If an open election were held this year, few doubt that the Muslim Brotherhood would win. An Islamist group, the Brotherhood has won hearts and minds through charitable work and exploited religion to thrive despite ruthless repression against it. It purportedly renounced violence in the 1970s, but its motto continues to be: ‘Allah is our objective. The Prophet is our leader. Qur’an is our law. Jihad is our way. Dying in the way of Allah is our highest hope.’”

And, what of Islamic Brotherhood?

“A social and political movement which started in Egypt in 1928 by Hasan al-Banna for the purpose of establishing a pan-Islamic state, transcending all current political and geographic divisions. Like those before him, al-Banna also regarded the West as posing a fundamental threat to the future of Islam. He felt that even worse than military campaigns were the attempts to import Western culture and political ideals. The root of Muslim problems was that the Shari’a (Islamic law) had not been implemented – once this was accomplished, everything would be better.” (Taken from: Islamic Extremism)

This is the same Muslim Brotherhood that assassinated Anwar Sadatin spite of Sadat’s attempts to assure them of his Islamic fidelity. Is it any wonder that the Brotherhood continues to call for “a more open and democratic political system in Egypt.”

Tracing the so-called hydra-headed monster of Islamic terrorist organizations is not the intent of this discussion. One can deliberate for countless hours on this serpentine figure (Please see http://www.state.gov/s/ct/rls/rpt/fto/2001/5258.htm). But, what is of peculiar note is where Secretary Rice delivered this sea-change in American foreign policy: In the heart of Egypt, where the Brotherhood and scores of Islamicists recruit insurgents against America’s War on Terror!

IRANIAN DEMOCRACY AT WORK

While the U.S. attempts to light the fires of Iraqi liberty and democracyagainst the backdrop of rabid Islamic insurgency, London bombings, and ominous threats upon homeland US targets (Including “soft targets in the U.S. like movie theaters, restaurants and schools” etc.) (Please see: http://www.jihadwatch.org/archives/005364.php), the Iranian people by the millions decide it’s time to elect an even more radical regime to pilot their nation through the incursions from the West!

Of course, with the election of hardliner and American hostage taker, Mahmoud Ahmadinejad (though vehemently denied by Iranian authorities), at summer’s commencement (2005), how heartening are his initial exploits heard in the West:

“Today, we can say that nuclear technology is our right!”

How comforting too, to know that a “Greater Persia”which encompasses Southern Iraq’s Shiite majorityalso awaits the full development of the democratic Islamic Republic’s nuclear program. Some, like Michael Rubin in Forward Magazine, conjecture that the Bush Administration has no coherent policy on Iran regarding the spread of “democracy.” Dear Michaellet me disabuse you of such folly! The West, led by the Bush Administration, knows precisely how to “democratize” and, ipso facto, diffuse the Islamic Bomb! If, on the other hand, you consider this contrary to “democratic ideals” – live with it.

ISLAMIC MODERATES?

There is this Western fascination, perpetrated by certain strata of its intelligentsia and fomented by both the progressive and entrenched liberal media, that the vast majority of clear-thinking Moslem leadership, when push comes to shove, is tolerant and merciful; yes, caring souls who long to live in peace with all mankind, especially with folks in the West.

Frankly, let’s quit pussy-footing around with discovering a Salman Rushdie here, a Dr. Khalid Duran there, or even a Tashbih Sayyed, President of the Council for Democracy and Tolerancethese rare exceptions dwell in the ethereal world of the West’s civilization. What’s happening on Dr. Miller’s ground bespeaks the antithesis of the so-called moderate Moslem.

One gets this image of President Bush standing amidst a sea of moderate Moslem clerics gatheredall the while this miniscule segment of Islam is utterly overshadowed by the vast majority of mainstream believers in Allah to whom “moderate Moslem” is regarded in the Qur’an as an Infidel and should be treated as any Christian, Jew, Hindu, Buddhist, etc.

REDUCTIO AD ABSURDUM”Reduction to Absurdity”

Let us not be so nave as to think that the face the U.S. Government projects regarding this majority of Moslem moderates existsaccept in the political world of electioneering. How foolish are they who assume that the neocons who currently implement American foreign, and increasingly, domestic policy, do not have a plan which incorporates her national interests (i.e., oil) and the “pacification” of true Islam (i.e., “radical” Islam).

The longer the War on Terror lasts, the clearer this Administration’s profile of its enemy becomes. To conjure the notion that this Administration is void of religious impulse in its decision-making policies towards Islam is ludicrous to the extremenonsense, they are acutely aware that given freedom from dictatorship, Islamic fundamentalists and their legions will carry the day . . . and that may be precisely what the West wants!

Absurd? To the contraryIslam is a total way of living, not just a religion! Church and state are not separate entities as in the West. Such separation is anathema to Islam. Islamic fundamentalists in virtually every nation in the Middle East are aggressively attempting to overthrow “secular” governments like those in Algeria and Egypt.

“Civil rights” are obscene in Islam:

“Because there was no concept of personal freedom or civil rights in the tribal life of seventh-century Arabias, Islamic law does not recognize freedom of speech, freedom of religion, freedom of assembly, or freedom of the press. This is why non-Muslims, such as Christians or Bahais, are routinely denied even the most basic civil rights.

“The despots of the Ottoman Empire and the present dictators of Libya, Jordan, Iran, Iraq, Syria, Sudan, Yemen, etc. are merely examples of seventh-century Arabian tyranny transplanted into modern times . . .

“Incarceration without due process; the use of torture; political assassination; the cutting off of hands, feet, ears, tongues, and heads; and the gouging out of eyesall of these things are part of Islamic law today because they were part of seventh-century Arabian culture.

“To Westerners, such things are barbaric and should not have any place in the modern world. Islam is a distinctively Arabian cultural religion. Unless this is firmly grasped, no real understanding of Islam is possible.” (Robert Morey, The Islamic Invasion, 1992, p. 26)

So, to extrapolate a final resolution to “the problem” facing American foreign policy makerswhatever the administrationunfortunately revolves to reductio ad absurdum: There will be a final conflict! And, with such “conflict resolution” comes collateral damagethe kind no one wants to talk about! That leads us to a most disgusting conclusion . . .

PONS ASINORUMLiterally: “Bridge of Asses”

Pons asinorum was originally used by Euclid’s fifth proposition in geometry. The Latin phrase connotes “any obstacle that stupid people find hard to cross.” In sum: How do we get these donkeys to cross the bridgeafter all, it’s for their own good!

Repeatedly heard on the air waves is the great division within the American public regarding the “real and present danger” posed by the War on Terror. The spectrum of Viet Nam’s humiliation, and how that war was waged through constrictive “rules of engagement” haunts us. Viet Nam’s retraction caused the American Empire to militarily (but not economically) acquiescesomehow they just couldn’t get us to cross the bridge!

Ah, but lessons learned from past history, cannot but secure our glorious future. Yet, all-out war circa America’s declaration leveled at Fascism at the close of 1941 would be unprecedentedit would take a vile act of extreme consequence to drive the nation across that bridge!

How quickly we regressed to our original liberality after 9/11’s calamitous day. Yet, Islamic tidbits along the wayBali, Spain, now London . . . how much of this can we take, before we cross that bridge? It will not take a great deal to excite the American giant to acts of all-out war. Alas, is this not what Osama ben-Laden has declared upon the West and her leadership? Hear OBL quote his sacred writings:

“Surah III (42): ‘Slay the idolaters wherever you find them, and take them, and confine them, and lie in wait for them at every place! Ambush.’ Again in Surah 1X (45): ‘when you meet the unbelievers, smite their necks, then, when you have made wide slaughter among them tie fast the bonds. Then again,The Dinner Table [5.51]: ‘O you who believe do not take the Jews and the Christians for friends; they are friends of each other; and whoever, amongst you takes them for a friend, then surely he is one of them; surely Allah (the name of their God) does not guide the unjust people.’”

Now, that eliminates most progressive wiggle room, doesn’t it? And, just in case the legions of Islamic terrorist organizations don’t convince you of their “War Against the West” – let this recent London photo convince you otherwise:

Indeed, as the man hiding in the West vainly attempts to convey the reality of the matter:

“‘If this isn’t about Islam,’ added Rushdie, ‘why the worldwide Muslim demonstrations in support of Osama bin Laden and al-Qaeda? Why are the war’s first British casualties three Muslim men who died fighting on the Taliban side? If terrorism is to be defeated, the world of Islam must take on board the secularist-humanist principles on which the modern [world] is based, and without which Muslim countries’ freedom will remain a distant dream.’”

“The Independent reported that Rushdie’s claims were rejected by prominent British Muslims.”

Thus, the case against “democracy” as we know itor even as Islam could ever know itis irreconcilably at odds with the faith of Mohammed. For the Americans and her representatives in high places to proclaim the virtues of “liberty, fraternity, and equality” to the Moslem world is nigh a declaration of all-out war. In the ears of Islam was it not this very “secular” philosophy which heralded the rise of agnostic socialism and atheistic communism? Why should Moslems succumb to two, yea three, of the devil’s trident spears: Secularism, Christianity, and Zionism?

GOG-MAGOGTHE ULTIMATE “ON THE GROUND” REALITY – ENDING THE (THEOLOGICAL) STALEMATE

The “Little Satan” – in the eyes of Islam is Israel . . . and the “Great Satan” is the USA. This implacable hatred is irreversible and is repeatedly substantiated in the Qur’an itself!

All the ignorant, superficial, and absurd discussion regarding peace in the Middle East will not come at the circumference of a negotiating tablebe it Camp David, Madrid, Oslo, or the incessant shuttles that forestall the inevitability of conflict; to wit:

“No matter how many peace accords are signed, this fundamental disagreement between Jews and Arabs on the basic facts remains, a disagreement which has caused (57) years of bloodshed. Echoing Islamic doctrine, the PLO denies that the Jews ever had possession of the Promised Land even under Joshua and David and claims that it always belonged to the Arabs . . . even that the Jews ever existed as a nation is denied! They are not acknowledged to be a national, ethnic group of people at all, but merely followers of a religion” (“Cup of Trembling” – 1995, Dave Hunt, pp. 287-88).

Once again, the brilliance of Dave Hunt shines in his above statements . . . and he continues, like so many American evangelical Christians who await the Second Coming of Christ:

“We are moving in the direction which the Bible says will be taken. It is the road to disaster, to Armageddon, but on the way it detours through temporary peace. ‘When they say ‘Peace and safety,’ then cometh sudden destruction,’ wrote Paul. That statement tells us that the world must reach a point where it believes that peace has been achievedand, of course, that must involve the Middle East. Centuries earlier, Daniel, inspired by the Holy Spirit, wrote that it would be through peace that the Antichrist would destroy many (Daniel 8:25: “By peace shall he (Antichrist) destroy many”). Obviously it would not be genuine peace, but a pseudo peace that would weaken Israel’s defenses and strategic protection, making her vulnerable to destruction and encouraging her enemies to attack.” (Ibid., pp. 297-98).

The necessary catalyst that will trigger the “peace” of Antichristi.e., Pax Antichristusthe singular and seminal event that will precipitate the march to Armageddonis NOT the conflagration between the West and Islam (i.e., the Gog-Magog War), but the spurious ejection or secret rapture of the very Church called to give TESTIMONY (mar-too-ree-on; Strong’s #3142; cf. “martyr” and “martyrology”) in the very midst of the “street of the Great City” (i.e., Babylon, Revelation 11:3-8).

No, the believing Corpus Christi (Body of Christ) is literally ejected from this tumultuous scene for the revelation of Pax Antichristus. In point of factboth Jews and Moslems are left with Antichrist himself who somehow orchestrates through subterfuge, cunning, and satanic perspicacity: Pax Antichristus!

“Very soon, millions upon millions of those living on this earth will be mysteriously snatched away from the planet and taken to heaven! Only then can the Antichrist be revealed. In fact, this event will be the catalyst that will catapult him into power at the very beginning of Daniel’s seventieth week. Nothing else could possibly do so” (Hunt, “Cup of Trembling” – pp. 365-66).

And, I hasten to add: Nothing could be further from the truth of Scripture!

To substantiate the distortion of the Blessed Hope (which alone is the actual Second Coming of Christ and the coming of the Jewish Messiah in bodily form for all to see) Hunt surmises:

“Such an event, involving the sudden mysterious disappearance of perhaps 200 million people, is beyond our ability to imagine. It is not difficult, however, to realize what the world’s reaction will be. This world will be absolutely terrorized! The Joint Chiefs of Staff, the President’s Cabinet, the Congress, the United Nations, and every responsible government and business and educational body will be meeting in emergency sessionstunned, devastated, trying to understand what happened to the missing million. ‘Where did they go? Who took them? Who will be next?’ will be the queries on trembling lips around the world . . . after the rapture, the ’survival’ of this event will unite those remaining as nothing else could. Islamic ambitions to take over the world, the mutual hatred of Serbian Orthodox and Croatian Catholics, the animosity and suspicion between North and South Koreansthese and all other enmities will be forgotten in the mutual terror and necessity of cooperating together . . . with all the Christians removed, Satan’s great opportunity to take over the world has arrived. Terrified and confused, those that remain will worship anyone who can bring order and meaning out of this chaos” (Ibid., p. 366).

THE PATRIOTIC CHURCH DOESN’T NEED GOG-MAGOG, TESTIMONY, OR PERSECUTION!

In a previous tome I excoriated brother Hunt’s faulty exegesis of Ezekiel 38 and 39 and his wishy-washy denial of nations aligned against Israel (i.e., Gog-Magog) bearing any real significance; and the horrific implications it has for both Christian and Jew, and for that matter, all peoples of the earth: http://www.the-tribulation-network.com/dougkrieger/gog_magog_or_armageddon.htm.

Furthermore, the “War Against the Evil Doers” of Islam, and the secularization of American society, has given rise to the Patriotic Church hell-bent on spreading “democratic values,” “Judeo-Christian ethics,” while every opportunity to evangelize the heathen (especially during the process of democratizing Islamic states) is trumpeted.

The presupposition to entertain Pax Antichristus as a result of the Church’s rapture (“coming for His saints”) denies the Church her greatest witness at history’s epiphanyleaving the Seventieth Week of Daniel (or what may be left of it) to the “apostate Jews” who are once again isolated and left to face the horrors of Jacob’s Trouble alone.

No, this is NOT the Messianic Scenariothis is not the witness and testimony left for either the Church or Israel in the “last days” (i.e., the Two Witnesses of Revelation 11: The Two Olive Trees (Israel) and the Two Lampstands (The Church). The ultra-dispensationalist, Christian Reconstructionist, Dominionist/Theocrat, et al., Evangelical Protestants and/or Catholic/Orthodox alike, have devised religious themes which circumvent Antichrist’s final collision with true Christianity and covenantal Israel.

The onrush of deception and rank apostasy awaiting the faithful as the campaign to democratize the Islamic world accelerates, will, at the close of Gog’s defeat, and the immediate “peace” which follows this cataclysmic confrontation, assuredly be a rapture, yea, a euphoria of exultation, as a Triumphant Christianity and a surviving Israel will herald the era of Pax Antichristus! (Note: More akin to Nazi Germany’s euphoric sensations after the conquest of Poland!)

Carefully, very carefully read the sequential nature of these promisesto those of you who believeand to those who observe our folly, remember, do you really affirm that the roadmap to peace in the Middle East leads through Washington; do you?

“Now brethren, concerning the coming of our Lord Jesus Christ and our gathering together to Him, we ask you, not to be soon shaken in mind or troubled, either by spirit or by word or by letter, as if from us, as though the day of Christ had come. Let no one deceive you by any means; for that Day will not come unless the falling away (i.e., the “apostasia” (Grk.) or apostasy) comes first, and the man of sin (i.e., Antichrist) is revealed, the son of perdition, who opposes and exalts himself above all that is called God or that is worshiped, so that he sits as God in the temple of God, showing himself that he is God” (II Thessalonians 2:1-4).

The secret rapture does not come firstthe Great Falling Away from the Faith and the revelation of the Antichrist himself occurs first! To distort the straightforward presentation of these sequential Scriptures for the sake of an elite core of Christians to escape earth’s most troublesome hourand her greatest ingathering of souls into the Kingdom of His dear Sonis anathema to everything for which the Cross of Christ stands! Furthermore, it is an affront to “The Cry of the Martyrs” who immediately in the Fifth Seal of the Apocalypse precede the celestial disturbances of the Sixth Seal of that same Revelation Chapter 6 and which Jesus spoke of so clearly in Luke 21:25-28i.e., the sequence is abundantly clear:

(1)The “Tribulation Saints” cry out for relief from persecution under the “wrath of the Antichrist/Beast” in the Fifth Seal of Revelation 6:9-11: “When He opened the fifth seal, I saw under the altar the souls of those who had been slain for the word of God and for the testimony (i.e., “martyr”) which they held. And they cried with a loud voice, saying, ‘How long, O Lord, holy and true, until You judge and avenge our blood on those who dwell on the earth?’ Then a white robe was given to each of them; and it was said to them that they should rest a little while longer, until both the number of their fellow servants and their brethren, who would be killed as they were, was completed.”

(Note: To theologically convolute the text and say that these “Tribulation Saints” are somehow NOT the Church (i.e., “outside of being in Christ”) or to identify them solely as “Israel” (i.e., persecuted Jews) is utterly outrageous and flies in the face of all that “testimony” implies and its absolute connectivity to Christ Himself and those who willingly “give up their soul lives unto the death” (cf. Rev. 1:2, 9; 6:9; 11:7; 12:11, 17; 19:10)thus, the Church is most assuredly here on the earth during the 70th Week of Daniel, not sequestered off into the heavens somewhere in a secret rapture!)

(2)The “celestial disturbances” recorded in Revelation 6:12-17 issue in the ultimate “wrath of the Lamb” (Revelation 6:16) and the “great day of His wrath.” Likewise, Luke 21:25-26 speaks of these same heavenly disturbances PRIOR to the coming of the Son of Man. (Note: The Fifth Seal bespeaks of the “wrath of the Antichrist/Beast” (Revelation 12:12) – whereas the Sixth Seal introduces the “wrath of the Lamb” wherein those who have suffered under the Fifth Seal are NOT “subjected/appointed . . . to ‘wrath’” (i.e., the “wrath of the Lamb,” cf. I Thessalonians 5:9)).

(3)The Second Coming of Christ – the “Coming of the Son of Man” – Luke 21:27-18 and Revelation 6:16-17 (Note: The “Wrath of the Lamb” is the miraculous and final bodily intervention of the Son of Mani.e., His Second Coming for the Church, and Messiah’s coming for Israel (Zechariah 14:1-9)).

The failed policies of “peace and safety”exacerbated by an implacable and determined world religion bent on world dominion, and resisted, yea, inspired to enlist in the military defeat of this awful foe, by modern Christian crusadersbespeaks of the most massive falling away from the faith ever during the Church’s 2,000-year history.

Indeed, this apostasy can only be aided and abetted by the sincere, but distorted, exegesis of Scripture exemplified by well-meaning American evangelicalsevangelicals who today ride the crest of patriotism in the War on Terror; anticipating the triumph of good over evil; entrenchment of the American New World Order System; curtailment of rampant secularism-relativism; and, the pacification-evangelization of Islam.

Notwithstanding the deceits and apostasies embedded in the spread of “Democratic Globalism” and its false promises of “peace, peace” – regrettably championed by conservative Christendom and sincere Jews – it is our fervent prayer, as Daniel foresaw in the midst of Jacob’s Trouble:

“At that time Michael shall stand up, the great prince who stands watch over the sons of your people; and there shall be a time of trouble, such as never was since there was a nation, even to that time. And at that time your people shall be delivered, every one who is found written in the book . . . those who are wise shall shine like the brightness of the firmament, and those who turn many to righteousness like the stars forever and ever” (Daniel 12:1 & 3).

For a full graphic presentation in the above article with all working links, please go to http://www.the-tribulation-network.com

Doug is a member of the “Last Days Network” . . . a group of evangelical pundits providing news and analysis on Religion in Politics. “Applied Biblical prophecy,” apostasy and deception, the impact of the New American World Order System, and the influence of the Religious Right and Left upon American culture–are topics discussed by the group. He is an educator in the public schools (California) and an administrator.


Screenwriting, Screenplays, Screenwriters – Good Ideas For S November 26, 2008

Filed under: Publishing Management @ 10:11 am

The principle for writing good screenplays begins with good idea generation and then the use of structure to extrapolate that idea into a coherent story.

Sources of Good Ideas

a) Ideas that push cultural boundaries work well. Guess Who’s Coming to Dinner, In the Heat of the Night, The Defiant Ones, On the Watefront and so on were all controversial in their time and still very watchable movies.

b) Ideas that tug at the emotions and arouse passions. Imagine the worst thing you would want to happen to you. What are you most embarrassing moments? What causes the most pain?

c) Cathartic events. Protagonists engage in conflict and challenge but the final act is always cathartic.

d) Aspirational and self-actualising events. Make the audience move toward their ideal selves.

e) Fantasy and escapism. Take the audience to a new place, we’re tired of this world today.

f) Humour. What are the funniest, most ridiculous, most hypocritical, incongruous, bizarre, irrational moments of life.

g) Education and morality. Teach them something or show them how we should be.

h) Special people. Take us into the world of people we fear or admire. Show us the lives of people who have travelled to places we dare not or cannot go.

i) Romance and love. How sweet it is when we can get it.

j) Different people. Show us how different people live. Compare and contrast.

k) The power of the group. Show us how we are more intelligent, able and greater together than alone.

l) Ambition. Is it pleasure or poison. Does it fulfill or corrupt.

m) Friendship. How real are our friendships. Do we know who our real friends are. What happens when they betray us.

n) Intellectual cross pollination – search the media, information sources…

o) Simply choose a story and write a screenplay. Good ideas will come to you during the project – make sure you capture them.

Structural Templates

a) The classic template is the HERO’S JOURNEY, consisting of 106 sequences with more than 30 in the final act.

The Hero’s journey can be reformed in an infinite number of ways:

b) The THREE KINGS, where the three rivals battle it out.

c) The LONE WOLF, where the Hero succeeds without he aid of allies, the Goddess or the Shape Shifter.

d) NO WAY BUT DOWN, where an anti-hero falls from grace and does not recover.

These topics are further discussed and Story Structure Templates and other Managing Creativity and Innovation products are available at http://www.managing-creativity.com/

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Kal Bishop, MBA

About the Author: Kal Bishop is a management consultant based in London, UK. He has consulted in the visual media and software industries and for clients such as Toshiba and Transport for London. He has led Improv, creativity and innovation workshops, exhibited artwork in San Francisco, Los Angeles and London and written a number of screenplays. He is a passionate traveller. He can be reached on http://www.managing-creativity.com/

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Paint Me A Picture November 25, 2008

Filed under: Publishing Management @ 9:26 pm

Compare these two paragraphs:

“I rented a room in an old building on Broadway. The room was dark, and had not been occupied for many years. Dust and spiderwebs were hanging from every wall and corner. I went up the stairs, and did not see a cobweb because of the darkness. It hit me in the face; it was creepy.”

“I took a large room, far up Broadway, in a huge old building whose upper stories had been wholly unoccupied for years until I came. The place had long been given up to dusts and cobwebs, to solitude and silence. I seemed groping among the tombs and invading the privacy of the dead, that first night I climbed up to my quarters. For the first time in my life a superstitious dread came over me; and as I turned a dark angle of the stairway and an invisible cobweb swung its slazy woof in my face and clung there, I shuddered as one who had encountered a phantom.”

The first paragraph accurately describes the setting; the second takes you there, and puts you smack in the middle of the action. You see, feel and sense everything that the narrator has experienced. The difference between the two lies in the use of powerful adjectives and adverbs. Effective use of descriptive words allows your readers to paint a mental picture, and transmutes them from passive recipient to active participant.

The English language is redolent with adjectives and adverbs, each of which imparts subtle shadings to the objects or actions they describe. Yet, writers tend to stick to the familiar. In the process, their manuscripts lack verve and allow reader interest to wane.

Adjectives allow the writer to expand on seminal ideas. For example, describing a train ride from the Indiana Dunes to Chicago’s Loop as “relaxing, yet educational” doesn’t offer the reader much information. Take that reader on your journey. Contrast the differences between the pastoral greens and sparkling open ponds of Dunes State Park to the rotting hulks of abandoned steel mills ringed with razor wire fencing, burned out businesses and blocks of housing projects in Gary, Indiana. Give them a glimpse of the rows of brick houses with neatly-clipped green lawns all lined up like soldiers on parade that you spot in East Chicago. Take them from the barren expanses of Hammond’s oil refinery tank farm to the magnificence of McCormick Place’s glass and steel glinting like a prism with the sunlight reflecting off Lake Michigan. If your reader eventually takes this journey, they will have an immediate sense of deja vu. After all, you’ve taken them there before.

Rich descriptions also allow you to build empathy for your characters by giving their subsequent reactions and behavior a context. Effective use of adjectives and adverbs allow the reader to “get into the head” of the character. To mention that your main character was abused as a child is instructive, but to take the reader through the main character’s dark memory of being thrashed on bare legs with the buckle end of a belt by a parent stinking of whiskey and sweat allows your reader to connect emotionally with your character. This serves to motivate them to read on; the reader, like your main character, longs for resolution.

One word of caution regarding adjective usage – don’t overdo. Many times, laborious descriptions tend to slow down the progress of a story. Remember that adjectives are the spices that brighten the meat loaf. Just enough and you’ve created a gourmet meal; too many, and your end result meets the garbage disposal.

About the Author

The author is a freelance writer/editor and organic farmer. Her ezine, Writer’s Notes, offers advice on writing, marketing and other topics relevant to writers and self-publishers. You can subscribe to Writer’s Notes via the JMT Publications website (http://continue.to/jmtpubs)


Not Your Grandma’s Grammar

Filed under: Publishing Management @ 6:07 pm

Not Your Grandma’s Grammar

As if it isn’t enough that computers have influenced just about every area of our lives, you’d think that something as sacred as the English language would remain immune to technology’s pressures. Not so. You may not need to learn new rules of grammar as often as you need to update your computer’s RAM, but tweaking your grammar skills will make you look more professional, and you can impress your friends and colleagues with some cutting-edge reasoning.

SPACED OUT
One or two spaces between sentences after a period?

Unlike individual letters in typewriters, which all take up the space of one character, computerized lettering allows for spacing differences depending on the size of the letter or punctuation mark. Hence, an m or an H is wider than an I. A period takes up less space than any letter so one space after a period on the computer creates a large enough gap to the eye to indicate the end of a sentence.

Computer programmers changed this rule, not grammarians or English teachers. The battle is still being waged, but I think the programmers will win.

QUESTIONABLE MARKS
Quotation marks and punctuation.

In Grandma’s day, a period used with quotation marks followed logic.
Examples: Myrtle said the word “darn”. The period went outside the quote because only the last word was in quotation marks, not the entire sentence.

Myrtle said, “I would never say that.” The period went inside the quotation mark because the entire sentence is a quote.

Today (actually for the last 30 years or so), the period always goes inside the quotation mark. Example: Myrtle said the word “darn.”

This does not follow logic, but it makes life easier for professional editors and for the rest of us who have enough to think about besides punctuation. Warning: If you write a quotation in England, ignore this advice. Logic is still followed on that side of “the pond.”

WE’VE COME A LONG WAY, MAYBE
Since Grandma’s day, we have shortened some words and dropped the former plural form. Memo and memos used to be memorandum and memoranda. Yet other words still retain their original length, spelling, and plural form. Example: curriculum and curricula.

With the word data, we no longer see the singular datum used at all. Data is now normally used as both the singular and plural form. Examples: The data are being tabulated. The data is useful to the scientists.

JUST BECAUSE
In Grandma’s day, you would be scolded if you started a sentence with but or because. But you wouldn’t have deserved that scolding then or now. Just make sure that if you start a sentence with either of these two words, you are following them with complete thoughts. Good Examples: But she would never say such a thing. Because of this bee sting, my arm is swollen. Bad Examples: But I can’t. Because I said so. These are incomplete thoughts and you will get your knuckles rapped with a ruler for writing them.

GET IT WRITE
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THE BLUE BOOK OF GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION by Jane Straus. www.grammarbook.com

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Useful Info about Video Distribution – Part One November 24, 2008

The sensible old Chinese catchphrase has an enormous gist; the sentiment described the reality that we all identify with an occasion loads more if it is viewed. Using video production or videography it is realistic to shoot a chain of events. Vidify offer unique video production and distribution solutions. Visit the website.

Today in numerous organisations presentations, video clips are generally implemented. By utilising video production services it’s possible to provide the essential message to various clientele to help convince them. Online Video production nowadays is used for various jobs; however, quite a few short format online video commercials and brand related presentations are usually developed in order to achieve particular company targets.

Audio video presentations are extremely in fashion & are therefore used in more or less any kind of industry activity. Creative agencies normally work with a certain kind of client or a company that are looking to create an online promotional video a presentation or an assortment of video clips. The entire occupation of video production is commonly carried out by a number of freelancers; nonetheless there are several video production companies around at the moment.

Participation of music composers, cameraman & script writers can also be typical when creating online video presentations. What’s more, marketing agencies & PR agencies have very recently become involved with video production & publishing.


Improving Your Ad Copy Can Make ALL The Difference

Filed under: Publishing Management @ 1:25 pm

Here’s ten simple yet POWERFUL idea’s to improve your ad copy,
which can instantly skyrocket your sales.

1. You could decrease or increase the length of
your ad copy. There is no rule on how long your
ad copy should be unless space is a consideration.
The ad should be long enough to sell your product.

2. You could add some sub headlines on your ad
copy. Sub headlines act just like headlines; they
grab the readers attention. They’ll keep the readers
interested as they continue to read your ad.

3. You could ask your reader questions through out
the ad copy. They will answer the questions in their
own head as they read your ad copy. The questions
you ask should persuade the reader into buying.

4. You could highlight keywords through out your
ad copy. The keywords should be attractive to
your target audience. You could highlight them with
color, underlines, italics, etc.

5. You could bullet or indent your benefits on your
ad copy. Must people won’t read a whole ad copy,
so make your products benefits standout and you
won’t lose the sales from all the skimmers.

6. You could change the size of your text on your
ad copy. You want to make your text large enough
so it’s not hard to read. You also want your headline
and major points to be larger so they will standout.

7. You could raise or lower the price on your ad
copy. A higher price could increase the perceived
value of your product and a lower price could
lesson your product’s value.

8. You could add proof of results on your ad copy.
You should include testimonials, endorsements,
and factual statistics to prove your product’s claims.

9. You could add special offers on your ad copy.
It’s usually easier to sell the offer than the product.
You could use discounts, free bonuses, volume
sales, etc.

10. You could eliminate the hard-to-understand
jargon on your ad copy. Unless your product calls
for technical words, you want your ad to be read
without people pulling out a dictionary.

About the Author

Author Dan Brown has been active in internet marketing for the past 4 years. Dan currently is working with the Zabang search engine introducing their new affiliate program, which is due out July, 2005. Zabang


“How You Can Find Freelance Children’s Writing Positions Tha

Filed under: Publishing Management @ 2:35 am

Freelance children’s writing positions are always advertised. Rather, the schooling to learn how to write for these jobs is advertised. But, there is often a large lack of employment vacancies actually available. Many of these companies offering to train individuals in these positions claim that there are quite a few companies offering employment or that will publish their work. In fact, it is up to the individual to find these positions themselves, and as it turns out, it is very difficult to get published. So, when the opportunity for freelance children’s writing positions becomes available, it is essential that good care be taken to ensure that the relationship lasts.

As in the example above, many times jobs like this are just too good to be true. But, that does not mean that careers in this field have to be hard to find. First off, providing yourself with a good education is the most important aspect. Giving the companies who contract you for employment excellent work will provide the most benefits to both parties. They get what they want and find a good writer in you. Building these strong foundations is what is going to make you successful. It is extremely important that you follow directions and communicate well with your client. Insure you know just what they need, how they want it done, and any other expectations they have.

Using creative ideas within a project is fine and often rewarded, but if they do not follow in with what the client desires, problems will arise. Communication can be a factor that breaks or make the relationship. Freelance children’s writing positions are out there. Job vacancies are regularly advertised. But, to get the ones that will last, you have to take the first step by presenting yourself as a good person for the company to work with. By communicating about goals, ideas, and expectations, there is little room for mistakes or failure. Instead, you can build on these jobs so that they become regular employment.

About the Author

Visit http://www.FreelanceWritingResource.com for more Articles, Resources, News and Views about Freelance Writing Jobs. This article may be reprinted in full so long as the resource box and links are included intact.


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